warm delightful sunshine
filling the day with smiles
reboot
warm balmy breezes
reboot
the sun is shining down
smiling on mother nature
warming the earth below
reboot
stuck in a rut
locked in a cubical
no hope for escape
system stable
society has messed up priorities....
Can we say "No more!!!" to work? Are there any societies in which the priorities are better? Are you beating your head against a brick wall by wishing? These are the questions that plague me as I read your poem today. The structure is good and just as frustrating as your day seems to be.
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