Wednesday, July 27, 2011

The Two Hundred Ninth, July 27, 2011

I want to take a ride
want to get away
hop on a balloon
see where we go

its a nice day for it
sun shining bright
light breeze to carry
could go a long way

a blue sky beckons
if only I could go
a feeling of floating
lost in nothingness

clouds roll in quickly
blue fades to gray
my eyes turn back
dreams fade once more

3 comments:

  1. Ahhhh, this life we live. We have a ticket to take us there. Sometimes we lose the ticket and must purchase a new one with blood, sweat, and tears.

    "My eyes turn back" (nice image)

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  2. "Lost in nothingness" ... such a pivotal line referring to both the feeling of floating and also turning the tone of the poem to fading dreams.

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  3. This poem reminds me of the longing for freedom.

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