I made a pledge to myself to write a poem a day for the entire year.
Now to follow through.
I preface this with a reminder; most of the poems written for this year long project will be done so spontaneously and therefore will not be edited. Bear with me on this. The project goal is to get them written over getting them perfect.
Several times there will simply be the poem with no title. When that happens suggestions for a title will be welcomed in the comments.
Okay, the rhyme scheme makes this EVEN funnier!! I will have to say, being the harsh critic that I am (cough, cough) that the rhythm of the last line needs stress on the first syllable, not the second.
Okay, the rhyme scheme makes this EVEN funnier!! I will have to say, being the harsh critic that I am (cough, cough) that the rhythm of the last line needs stress on the first syllable, not the second.
ReplyDeleteThis one is succinct.
ReplyDeleteI question whether the last line needs the "not even" ... 'we are never alone sitting in the can' says it all.
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