I watch the fading light
that once was common
common sense
common decency
common courtesy
common interest
the dimming was quiet
now bangs or booms
no oooos or ahhhhhhs
just the fading away
and a small little pop
self-absorbed takes over
amazing amount of centers
the world revolves around
it isn't global warming
its friction building
from too many axis
competing for lubrication
soon all the little pieces
will fly off into space
each their own trajectory
until they slow down
finding their own place
the next big bang....
I made a pledge to myself to write a poem a day for the entire year. Now to follow through. I preface this with a reminder; most of the poems written for this year long project will be done so spontaneously and therefore will not be edited. Bear with me on this. The project goal is to get them written over getting them perfect. Several times there will simply be the poem with no title. When that happens suggestions for a title will be welcomed in the comments.
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I like this poem very much. The first stanza is incredible. This poem has the depth I require, the storytelling I love, the rhythm that allows me to feel and sway, the personal touch I come to expect.
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