Sunday, December 11, 2011

The Three Hundred Forty Fifth, December 11, 2011

silence from the loud
empty shadows dance
light fades slowly
the presence still remains

missing begins at goodbye

3 comments:

  1. The depths you feel come from a life of openness. This short poem says more than an essay could say.

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  2. Very poignant. It is short but the intensity of feelings is conveyed. I like it.

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  3. This is very powerful.. maybe more so because of how condensed it is.. a bit like a dance lasts only a few measures of song but can impact a lifelong. Well done..well done

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